Truth or Dare

What! happened the tragic of course like it always is Dylan and Luisa were playing Truth or dare and Dylan asked Luisa truth or dare and Luisa picked dare and Dylan are a savage brother because he dared Luisa to eat a bun with rotten chicken and carrot in it so she did it because she had to but wait a sec Luisa got pay back and Dylan had to do all her home work for her today and she had lots of work so he did it and had 30 min sleep and did it for the whole night savage dylan because he got all the answer wrong.

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